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That was bad… bad grammar… bad English… I had not written for the longest time… and as the typhoon raged outside—I had no internet connection, I was forced to it… I sat down with my coffee and smoke and I started writing… writing the way I always did… just caressing each key on my computer keyboard and start forming words… I used to be good… and I thought I still have it… but that is what I came up with…
Yuck…
I would like to think there is hope… and that it could be salvage with editing… proof reading, I have not proof read it until now… I just went to read it and saw obvious errors, it was ridiculous… The idea came from Ricky Lee’s first novel, “Para Kay B”… I am to put myself in the shoe of someone else and try to see myself through that someone’s eyes—perspective… In the novel, he was made to put himself in the shoe on the person he hates the most… I tried a different approach… and be romantic… I am on the eyes of someone who is secretly in love with someone… I am in aim to produce a pop culture romance… I thought the idea is brilliant… it is first person point of view… but the story is third person…
This is a work in progress… no title yet…
I am open to edition of yours, just post them here… or suggestions… question may be answered… but please… please don’t ask me if it is fiction or not… come on…!
That was bad… bad grammar… bad English… I had not written for the longest time… and as the typhoon raged outside—I had no internet connection, I was forced to it… I sat down with my coffee and smoke and I started writing… writing the way I always did… just caressing each key on my computer keyboard and start forming words… I used to be good… and I thought I still have it… but that is what I came up with…
Yuck…
I would like to think there is hope… and that it could be salvage with editing… proof reading, I have not proof read it until now… I just went to read it and saw obvious errors, it was ridiculous… The idea came from Ricky Lee’s first novel, “Para Kay B”… I am to put myself in the shoe of someone else and try to see myself through that someone’s eyes—perspective… In the novel, he was made to put himself in the shoe on the person he hates the most… I tried a different approach… and be romantic… I am on the eyes of someone who is secretly in love with someone… I am in aim to produce a pop culture romance… I thought the idea is brilliant… it is first person point of view… but the story is third person…
This is a work in progress… no title yet…
I am open to edition of yours, just post them here… or suggestions… question may be answered… but please… please don’t ask me if it is fiction or not… come on…!
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